A letter to my penfriend

26th November, 2007

Dear Alan,

I am happy with my examination result. I got high marks.

My dream job is to be a fashion designer. I like to design clothes. I want to design beautiful and stunning clothes. I want to design my family clothes too. People will surely love my clothes. They will be happy. I want my parents to wear my clothes first. I want my sister to be my model. I will go around the world to meet many superstars and models. I will be famous. I know I can’t be a fashion designer unless I like designing clothes.

Please reply soon.

Love,
May


老師評語

A modest presentation of ideas. It’s a fairly commendable start.