Apply for a place in the secondary school

Dear Principal,

I would like to apply for a place in your school. I am now studying at Sha Tin Wai Dr.Catherine F. Woo Memorial School. I am twelve now. Let me introduce myself.

My favorite hobby is dancing. I started it one year ago. I am interested because the posture is very beautiful when I am dancing.

I want to study at your school because it is famous among the society and your school provides many extra-curricular activities.

I think I am self-disciplined, and hardworking. If I am lucky enough, I can study at your school to learn more. Although I am not good at many aspects. I really want to learn to be an all round student.

I am available to have an interview at your earliest convenience.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours truly,
Kary Hui