Ivan the Tiger

Far away in a beautiful forest, there lived a herd of tigers.

All the tigers enjoyed eating animals that were smaller than them.

Ivan was different from the other tigers. He liked to eat spaghetti.

One day, a herd of lions came. They felt so hungry.

"There's a herd of lions coming this way!" the eagle warned the tigers.

The tigers scared. "We've got to run out here!"

The tigers ran as fast as the rabbits. But in front of and behind them were the lions.

So Ivan put some spaghetti to the lion's mouths.

Then, the lions were full. At this time, the tigers ran away.

From that day onwards, the tigers didn't eat animals. In fact, a few of them started to learn eating spaghetti.


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